Open Poetry #46 |
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it's not me it's the bottle talking |
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shalisadefa Member
since 2009-08-13
Posts 114 |
I am drunk and I don’t give a damn anymore Cracked open a bottle and I’m gonna spill it Even if you don’t wanna hear it You’re gonna have to This never happened to me before either And it completely got me by surprise I know this is ‘a once in a lifetime’ Not even a fool will believe this can happen twice Are you still here Listening to the bottle talking No subtle poetical disguises I am gonna give it to you raw I want more of you and I don’t care If it’s not the most responsible thing to do My heart is telling me If you’re gone I might as well be dead But it’s not going to happen is it for this kind of relationship won’t hold life has no mercy for the indecisive and I don’t wanna be just special |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
shalisadefa - h'mmmmm, you sure said it well. Get that bottle out, perhaps I'll join you... BC |
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shalisadefa Member
since 2009-08-13
Posts 114 |
ready when you are BC |
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haaften New Member
since 2009-10-16
Posts 3 |
What's that saying again? Children and drunks always speak the truth. ![]() |
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LivingConfused Junior Member
since 2009-12-27
Posts 40 |
haaften I have never heard that before but I like it. shalisadefa. I would join in too. I enjoyed reading this(And have been there a time or three myself). It's works like this that makes me think how different it would sound to hear them read aloud. |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
It's all cool until we come to and remember that bottles really don't talk! ![]() I like the poem - (grins) you made me think. A |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
It may be raw and drenched in alcohol but the feelings seem genuine. It definitely holds one`s interest. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The bottle might be grinning, but in the end you know better. Well written! Love, Margherita |
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