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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
I see your hands shake And my heart aches Your heartbreaks Over my mistake And it makes me think That maybe it’s true I don’t look at things The way other people do Maybe I’m too different For anybody Not just you |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo EBM, I wouldn't worry about it, that's pretty normal. Bobby |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
YO Bobby darlin', are ya tellin' me feeling too different is the norm? ebm |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
ebm, its in being different that gives our lives it melody...we just play our song and those who groove to it will appear in our lives. ww |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Poets are extremely different [as are geniuses and other artists] than those who believe they don't have the talents they were born with. A lot of it is attitude... and for some, it's altitude.  Different is good! And good for us! |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Bless your heart Sunshine!  ebm |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
Clever poem. Delightful to read. Short and to the point. Very well expressed. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I love this. And I thought I was different...but now I wonder if I am just the same? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
No two people ever think alike...or are ever on the same plain at the same time...so while you may question, you, you are very significant, and a very special part of the whole...which makes you...you! Huggies... Lee J. |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Walt, when you feel like you're dancin' all alone in the dark that "groove" feels like a rut. |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Thanks Bastet, glad you liked it! ebm |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
CG & LeeJ, I know "it takes us all" thanks for the encouraging words. ebm |
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Dadygoose Member
since 2010-01-01
Posts 162A Communist country |
Well EBM? I am drawn to others who are different --- if only I had done something different, it would not have ruined a relationship, but I knew, and did it right next time. I have always been blind, but an illness stripped away my hearing and life took away everything I once held dear. Since I have readjusted somewhat, adopted a new believe system, but I am always going to be different whether pop culture likes it or not, or anybody cares or not. I despise pop culture and television, and prefer to haunt such off the wall places like piptalk where you can peer into other’s sols and worlds. Like you, what a tender, almost wistful, poignant write! Please write more of you … Please? Dadygoose Well EBM? I am drawn to others who are different --- if only I had done something different, it would not have ruined a relationship, but I knew, and did it right next time. I have always been blind, but an illness stripped away my hearing and life took away everything I once held dear. Since I have readjusted somewhat, adopted a new believe system, but I am always going to be different whether pop culture likes it or not, or anybody cares or not. I despise pop culture and television, and prefer to haunt such off the wall places like piptalk where you can peer into other’s sols and worlds. Like you, what a tender, almost wistful, poignant write! Please write more of you … Please? Dadygoose Hey, nobody's human! |
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