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Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2010-05-13 11:23 AM

If she should ever wake
From the darkest of dark sleep
I pray the Lord her soul I'll keep
If she should ever wake

I wait forever at her side
With no more tears to brush aside
And only the wind howling outside
Will be the only sound God makes
If she should ever wake

I told her I’m the first one she’ll see
And here I’ll always be
So she would come back to me
Oh what a smile my face would make
If she should ever wake

So I lay myself beside her
And write these songs for her
Hoping she could possibly hear
Wishing with wistful tears

I promised I would never leave
A promise I will never break
If she should ever wake

I hold her cold, unfeeling hand
Trying to understand
How to reap a harvest from a barren land
And love for loving’s sake
If she should ever wake

Never has time moved so slow
Nor darkness seemed more to grow
Into her dream I will follow
And pray my soul she’ll take
If she should never wake

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2010-05-13 11:28 AM

So much love and unsurpassed emotion.
Beautiful heart speak here, guy~

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

2 posted 2010-05-13 11:32 AM

touching me to tears here, CG. ebm

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

3 posted 2010-05-13 11:39 AM

Blues, thank you, that is beautiful of you to say.

ebm, thank you. I am honored to be touching you. This is one of the few of mine that I like.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

4 posted 2010-05-13 12:10 PM

Wicked good. Real emotion in this one.

Good work, CG.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

5 posted 2010-05-13 12:18 PM

Thanks Paul. Haven't seen you around much, but then again, I haven't been around too too much either.

srizah
Junior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 34
India

6 posted 2010-05-13 12:33 PM

Darkly sweet,
It asks for more,
my taste for verse aroused,
I will come for more
Such is (your) verse
music forever more

~srizah~

Live Life!

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

7 posted 2010-05-13 12:35 PM

That was very good stuff srizah...thank you!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2010-05-13 12:38 PM

this was so profoundly written, and felt...enjoyed

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

9 posted 2010-05-13 09:57 PM

I love this and am at a loss for words (for once)...this is amazing, and it's your best!

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

10 posted 2010-05-13 10:32 PM

wow...breathlessly beautiful!

Nicole Victoria
Junior Member

since 2010-01-22

Posts 24
California, USA

11 posted 2010-05-13 11:00 PM

One of the best. Well done in form and content. The emotion is strong in this one.

Semper Fi

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

12 posted 2010-05-13 11:56 PM

That was so cool

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

whisperingwalt
Member

since 2010-04-29

Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada

13 posted 2010-05-14 01:24 AM

Excellent writing...when our emotions manifest itself in just the words...you wrote in such a way that it touched many..Bravo!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

14 posted 2010-05-15 03:01 AM

This one is very inspireing

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