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Shore to Shore
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Shore to Shore |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Shore to Shore The sea that waters our souls, Crashes between our shores Creating a turbulent sense of our reality For you are you As I am I Each of us a distinctly seperate shore Only our empathy and compassion Can ever still the waters... ...between our shores |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
I like how this works on a one on one basis and on a Nation to Nation level as well. Well done. ebm |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
You know I never thought of it as nation to nation but more of a one to one relationship poem...however know that I see it in light of your insight, you know it can also work on a nation to nation...thanks for you insight ebm..ww |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your title grabbed me, but it was your ending that warmed me and left me with a sense of calm. Pretty piece of poetry, walt~ |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Blues, Glad you enjoyed it..thanks for the kind remarks. ww |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Your metaphorical usage of shores was spendidly executed. |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Earl...and your feedback thoughtful and greatly appreciated.ww |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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