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Open Poetry #46

Searching for the Word

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2010-05-11 03:03 AM

If my words are mumbled
jumbled
not so smooth
here

tizz because
I am unaware
where we go from here

your forehead wrinkles
in frustration
searching searching

your head turns...
everywhere
lips pursed
cheeks smooth

I can't see anything, but
how cute

twisted, perhaps, am I
sadistic
It's all just preamble
to your sigh

for when the wrinkles disappear
you find the word
you're there

and...

Oh, that smile

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

1 posted 2010-05-11 08:34 AM

I love this! The last line ties it up beautifully! ebm

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

2 posted 2010-05-11 06:55 PM

whoa ! I like the style of this.

Zeitgeist.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2010-05-11 09:23 PM

Nice...James

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