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Open Poetry #46

miscommunication

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2010-05-10 12:16 PM

Sometimes I get lost in my logic
reading hearing what I say
and lose sight of my meaning
what I am trying to convey

losing lost for love in its purpose
gets perceived on the friend array

or in the noose of humor
for humors sake
perceived as a jerk
thats what they take

synergy
just text
no body language
it all gets scrambled

protect
defend
or else lookout
your heart'll get trampled

how can you take it slow
if one is slow to warm
and the other is ready in the blocks
full on set to go

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

1 posted 2010-05-10 11:58 PM

Damn that miscommunication! More hearts have been lost and more wars fought to its mechinations than any properly percieved message. All the same, I enjoyed the read and write. Thanks for the sharing. Peace.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2010-05-13 11:33 AM

You certainly conveyed the frustration, and truly, your thoughts are always so good.

You take human nature and expose it in a fine light, martini man.

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