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theoretical fairytales

Zeigeist
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since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

0 posted 2010-05-08 10:28 AM

theoretical fairytales

what has meaning,
what carries relevance,
to this ghost in me.
I see one thing, twice.

A neural net of fear is growing,
a neural net of fear is growing.

what is behind me,
when linear thought fails.
regression analysis finds
no point of origin.

Life
Love
Life
Love

theoretical fairytales

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

1 posted 2010-05-08 11:52 AM

An interesting piece... made me think... which is always good. One might say “paranoia, self destroyer,” but I get a sense that there is a greater questioning of self, where one comes from, and where one is going when there seems to be no anchor point. At least that’s what I walked away with. Thanks for sharing.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2010-05-08 12:21 PM

I also agree with Andrew... speaks volumns in the spirit of verse...well done.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2010-05-08 06:30 PM

There is no point to looking back.
Well done.

Zeigeist
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since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

4 posted 2010-05-10 08:28 AM

Thank you Andrew, I appreciate the reply

Zeitgeist

Zeigeist
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since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
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5 posted 2010-05-10 08:29 AM

Thanks LeeJ.

Zeitgeist

Zeigeist
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Posts 311
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6 posted 2010-05-10 08:29 AM

I hear ya TD.. I hear ya.

Zeitgeist

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2010-05-11 01:45 AM

well expressed, loved the creative repetition and style....I am fast becoming a fan of yours, I love how you express yourself, and I often relate to your powerful words.

viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

8 posted 2010-05-11 11:29 AM

We're on the same page, z-dawg.

Nice write, couldn't have put 'er better myself.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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