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Open Poetry #46

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whisperingwalt
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since 2010-04-29

Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada

0 posted 2010-05-07 01:16 PM

Soul to Soul

Your eyes sparkle with life
Your words captivate my thoughts
Your smile makes me smile
When your soul touches mine

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

1 posted 2010-05-07 02:07 PM

they say the eyes are the windows to the soul. I like this... very short, sweet and to the romantic point good job! ebm

whisperingwalt
Member

since 2010-04-29

Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada

2 posted 2010-05-07 03:53 PM

Thanks for the kind words...the eyes are definately the windows..wrote this a awhile back...always takes my back to a good place.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2010-05-07 07:25 PM

Your thoughts are endearing.

This was so nice to read, so easy on my eyes.

Welcome to Passions, whisperingwalt~

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

4 posted 2010-05-07 07:42 PM

Nicely done, clear and to the point.

Zeitgeist.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

5 posted 2010-05-07 09:04 PM

Short and sweet and quite romantic.

Quite cute in fact. Well done Walt.

Lindsay

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