Open Poetry #46 |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
I hate it History... The old wars The wounds... Camoflaged Baggage... Dodging bullets Landmines... The snipered Cheap shots... And rations of eggshells... History... I hate it |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You have caused me to check out your work further, miss, and here I find a treasure, without even a reply. Amazing how you knew so much about my last marriage! ration of eggshells......dynamite! |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
I am honored you took the time to check out my work. About this particular piece...describes a marriage (or 2) of mine. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Thanks for bringing this one back up 'Deer.... I must have missed it somewhere along the line. EBM...I have always enjoyed the study of history, but we all have some we would rather not relive. Most of what I read I wouldn't want to relive when it comes ot history...but I do so respect and admire what people have struggled through. biggest question for me was what have we learned from all the eggshell rations and sniping. |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
(laughing)Learned??? I have learned I can't change the sniper and I can only take so much..life is too short to play emotional duck and cover. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Can't change the sniper but we can learn to wear armor. As far as the art of walking on eggshells, we learn to say to hell with it and dance on them instead. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Made me smile... just 'cause. |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Sunshine- back at you! |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I`ll give it to you straight. I think this is a gem. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love the ambiguity EBM you put it down just right.....Great economy of words. Eric |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Thanks Earl that really makes me feel good considering nobody read it/commented when it was first posted. I am amazed how it has been "discovered". ebm _____________________________________ Thanks Eric, really glad you liked it! ebm |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
This, "And rations / of eggshells..." floored me, for eggshells, no matter where you walk you find them and crush them, History. I'm not a great fan of it either, but it has a way of clinging, huh? . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(!$! |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Its discouraging when we realize that no one has really learned from history. Enjoyed this. -Trina. |
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