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Open Poetry #46

Time

Elric
Junior Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 43
southbend, WA

0 posted 2010-08-27 04:34 AM

What is this fickle thing called time?
Time, a word that binds us to life.
If time doesn't exist than what are we?
Time, a word man made to bring structure to life.
In space time can be warped.
In space time doesn't exist.
If time doesn't exist than why would we?
Time, a word that all civilization is built apon.
What would happen if time disappeared?
Would we disappear?
What is this fickle thing called time?

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2010-08-27 06:25 AM

I've often wondered myslef about time and our existance. Nicely done, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

2 posted 2010-08-27 07:57 AM

You ask some thought provoking questions here, Elric. Truly makes one think.

Enjoyed the write.

~Sunkissed

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

3 posted 2010-08-27 10:49 AM

Time is a sledge pulled
by hard workers who need food
and encouragement.
It is a stepping drop, and
even biological.

Cannot resist when it comes to "time" and one who so clearly does understand it as you the author do here.

Elric
Junior Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 43
southbend, WA

4 posted 2010-08-27 04:23 PM

thank you everyone for the comments.

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