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Open Poetry #46
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Misty Lilacs
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White Birch Forest
0 posted 2010-04-30 04:38 PM




brrrr …

Sun warms the daytime
moon and wind bring in the chill
brrrr … wake shivering
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Andrew Scott
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1 posted 2010-04-30 09:20 PM

That pretty much describes this morning. Nice haiku. Peace.

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Misty Lilacs
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2 posted 2010-04-30 10:08 PM

Thank you Andrew! brrrr. . . here also! Waiting patiently (not) for Spring's warm weather.

ooxx  Marti


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3 posted 2010-05-04 10:54 AM

Yo dear Misty Lilacs,

The thought is there in this little Haiku, it's just hard to see it with the light font.  I'd try it in black font.

Bobby
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