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Open Poetry #46

Another Death

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

0 posted 2010-04-30 12:01 PM

He woke this morning raging.
I was there to catch his whim.

I played the guitar afterwards.
I was thinking of another man again.

He broke inside me then.

He bends and I break-
it's too easy now to fall.
I wish for other days and years
when I seemed to have it all.

He woke this morning raging
and I had to please when
I was thinking of some other man
and closed my eyes again.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2010-04-30 12:03 PM

you and me and him again...but you strum lovely..enjoyed you ms

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2010-04-30 12:05 PM

indeed DS

yes, you know

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

3 posted 2010-04-30 02:42 PM

Well brutally honest and to the point as usual and well written as usual thank you..

Goldenrose.

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC.

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

4 posted 2010-04-30 03:52 PM

I may pick my Larrivee,
My Martin just for fun
But I do as you do,
I think of another one.

This was a great write gal.....

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

5 posted 2010-04-30 10:41 PM

Errant recollection of a warmer yesteryear,
emotion lies believing in a love not here.
Past encounters wound a heart upon arrow's beam,
a bleeding melancholy waning broken dream.

Aww, Dixie, this time you break my heart with your words.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

6 posted 2010-04-30 10:44 PM

Dear Dixie I hope that other man is worthy of your thoughts. Thoughts are often the

first step down the wrong path, just be careful. A big hug dear friend.

Lindsay

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