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the smoother sherwood
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the smoother sherwood |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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perhaps you were innocent enough in your shaving of sherwood to leave that smoother mound better for warring you said in savored sheriffese can't hide a robin where there are no trees and his richard either if his intentions are kingly you continued as you might have winked at your lady but she was doing her nails with that smug smile and remembering things about the thick shafted arrow her other lover had offered to wound her with if she were up for some targeting behind the walls down by the brook where the horses watered she was often seen there as that lady in waiting then again sometimes she was more the made marian _______________ daark (scribblenote...ok Russell Crow paid me big bucks to advertise his new movie..so) |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Your poetry takes me into a surrealistic world in which I may feel disorientated but am grateful for the journey. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
earl...disorientation was in the recipe...thanks guy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can always tell your poems by the title when I look at the left then graze to the right to see your name mmmmmmm |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms dixie..I do love how you graze...thanks lady |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
...Shaving sherwood...now there's an image! Wow! ~EBM |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
EBM..thank you for the touch |
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