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Open Poetry #46

Just One More Memory

Abe
Senior Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 694
Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end!

0 posted 2010-01-13 12:05 PM

Just One More Memory

The sun fell out of sight
Ending another day
Rep1aced by the nighttime
The moon, to 1ight my way.

A part of the past
And never more to be
Just like yesterday
It's one more memory.

The music is ending
The sweet sounds once so c1ear
Fading into si1ence
Becoming hard to hear.

Another song has ended
The tune has ceased to be
And just 1ike yesterday
Another memory.

A picture is fading
That one I have of you
The face there grows hazy
Neath it's cover of b1ue.

Another love has died
Because we cou1dn't see
Now, 1ike those yesterdays
It's one more memory.

Del "Abe" Jones
Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity. copyright 1984

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

1 posted 2010-01-13 02:44 PM

Wow that was sad and beautiful. I like the rhymthe of the poem, and the emotions. Awesome!

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

2 posted 2010-01-13 09:39 PM

Very nice, I like your thoughts. latearrival

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