Open Poetry #46 |
The Knave |
Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
The Knave There once was a trooper, perhaps you know his name Who had for a dueler, a scoundrel most profane The bully, a horrid knave, had sanctimonious ways As he lashed out with curt words that hurt others for days Now our trooper attended to his own affairs He appeased the rogue, spoke not, lest the knave grow aware Self-imposed silence governed the trooper`s ways Yet pummeled he was by words that left him dazed It happened, one evening, the trooper spoke his mind He plucked up his courage and spoke with words most unkind Our hero knew when he decided to speak, he sealed his own doom For the knave, like a banshee, sang words that left a deep wound His own wounds our man cared not, for what had he become! To hear himself speak such smut, hurt his ears and made him glum It seems our trooper should have kept his trap shut For when he spoke, he too became a knave, a mirthless muck [This message has been edited by Earl Brinkman (04-30-2010 08:23 AM).] |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Wish I could rhyme. Very good. |
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OldBuddyOldPal Member
since 2008-12-15
Posts 87 |
perfect!!! well said... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You wrote it well Earl Keep up the good work. Lindsay |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Well written. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Earl, I like this one a lot. It's always good to remember, that words are always harmless. As the old saying goes--"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never hurt me." This is especially true over the Internet, when you're talking to a boob-tube. Bobby |
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