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Answer In My Fist |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan 
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Answer In My Fist How much of me is there how long before I am done I lay awake so often I feel small in my skin, my boots are too big, my sleeves too long. The air in my life smells bad and I breathe in way too much. I can't see what I should I don't hear the right things It hurts me to try to stand so tall How much do they want I have an answer in my fist just for them. Zeitgeist [This message has been edited by Zeigeist (04-30-2010 05:08 AM).] |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Feelin' the pain and frustration with this one... Haven't we all been there? On a technical note, you might want to substitute "to" with "too". -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
Glad you liked it Mark and thanks for the sharp eye.. I will fix the "too" right away. Zeitgeist |
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