Open Poetry #46 |
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If Cars Could Float or Fly. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. ![]() |
If cars could float or fly, I'd traverse the seas brave the swells to wash up, a pathetic mess, on the shores of your doorstep. If cars could float or fly, I'd fly through clouds just to get to you open the doors to let the rainwater pour out. if cars could float or fly I'd drive as fast as I could just to get to you and wash up, a pathetic mess in your arms. ____________________ Bad Habits. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I was picnicing with a friend one Sunday and watched a car drive right into the Willamette River and the float down it with four passengers. It was a yellow convertible amphibian. What an uncanny feeling watching it! It's too early here in the morning to get a sensible comment out of me, but I smiled at this poem, because one way or another, love floats the boat or gives us wings. So many crash landings... ![]() |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
I live in Stillwater, Minnesota -- Which actually has the highest concentration of "boat cars" from back in the day still operating. So I see quite a few every summer, people drive them on the river onto the sand islands and party with the rest of us folks who have regular old boats. ![]() Glad to have made you smile. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"If cars could float or fly, I'd fly through clouds just to get to you open the doors to let the rainwater pour out. if cars could float or fly I'd drive as fast as I could just to get to you and wash up, a pathetic mess in your arms." I love your way of romance.... ![]() it always feels so genuine |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Yup Sea, he is a softy isn't he? ![]() |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Well, Paul, that's the good thing about planes and boats. Ya know? Romantic you may be (and I do agree with the ladies on that) - but logic. The romantic side of you is clouding the logical side. That's why you have friends like me to point out the obvious. Okay, I am kidding - I love the poem. A |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Susan, thanks so very much. I'm fairly sure I do things the only way I know how. ![]() Mysteria, I yam what I yam. Thanks so very much! Aliboo, I appreciate the kind words. Maybe my boat can drive and my car can float. ![]() Fall in love early, fall in love often. [This message has been edited by viking_metal (01-14-2010 03:48 AM).] |
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