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Open Poetry #46

A Quiver in The Dust

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2010-04-26 11:05 PM

Quiver in The Dust

A gust of spring
Brushes by my cheek
My breath's heavy,
Broken, like my voice

There's no water
Quiver in The Dust

The Eagle flies
Not so Far away

Juju

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2010-04-27 02:45 PM

juju ms...enjoyed how you set the tone here and suggest the eagle is waiting for something to appear...kewl stuff

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2010-04-29 11:06 AM

this has an almost mystic presence to it..still not sure I fully get it, but I do know that I really enjoyed reading it umpteen times trying...

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

3 posted 2010-04-29 11:15 AM

You're muh steer ee us.

I likes dis wun.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Lamar Cole
Member

since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

4 posted 2010-04-29 11:18 AM

Very thought provoking.

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