Open Poetry #46 |
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Instinct |
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WTBAKELAR![]()
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA ![]() |
Instinct Time stood still, As if all clocks had stopped, And the summer breezes that carried away their thoughts, Blew gently through their cares and whisked them off to yesterday, They walked; Leaving footprints in silken sand, Turning every now and then, To watch the lapping waves wash them off to nowhere, Side by side, Carefree nothings, Not spoken, but felt, inside, Felt in the heart, the soul, Warmth, deep pleasing comfort, And flutters, Like a swarm of butterflies, headed south for the winter, The massive, uncountable flutters, In the rhythm that hears their desires, Fixated on the same thing, What pulls them? What drives them? Instinct, That built in knowledge, That tells them: when they have achieved their goal, Something about it; is right, It’s just right; it’s what they do, And they know, And they knew, Those feelings; in each others arms, Time stood still. The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked. |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Very Nice. |
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Dadygoose Member
since 2010-01-01
Posts 162A Communist country |
Oh, how impossibley beautiful. Yes, it is primal, universal and instinctual. How comforting to know such a fantasy can be shared, wordlessly, with someone I will care about. It reminds me that, even as I sleep, someone is also dreaming and fantasizing too, and that realization brings tears to my eyes, so I can’t read it very often. I have already read enough on Pip for one day and I have to stop. Your stuff is so very, very strong and I will keep it, if you don’t mind. GN Jaime Hey, nobody's human! |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
I bow to you and yours. This was an excellent piece with fine content. Thanks for sharing. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Hi Tracy I enjoyed your poem my friend but to be honest, I enjoy your rhyming poetry better. All the best. Take care. Lindsay |
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WTBAKELAR![]()
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Lamar, thank you so much for taking the time to comment on my thoughts. Tracey |
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WTBAKELAR![]()
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Dadygoose, your wonderful comments made my day, thank you so very much for these beautiful words and sentiments. Love like this always, Tracey |
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WTBAKELAR![]()
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Andrew, your thoughts are so appreciated, thank you for taking the time to comment. Tracey |
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WTBAKELAR![]()
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Lindsay, Thank you my dear friend for your thoughts and comments, I like trying different methods of expression, and I am glad you enjoyed this one, take care, Tracey |
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Dadygoose Member
since 2010-01-01
Posts 162A Communist country |
Dear Tracey. I really have to go, but I forgot to tell you that your poem is also about something that is very WHOLESOME and very NATURAL. To very loosely parafrais something I once read: is not heaven found in the arms of one's beloved? And ... you don't even have to wait for heaven until after you die!!!! Tracey, if yesterday I made your dan, then today you have already made mine double. And I truly, truly mean it. I better get off the computer now, tummy grouling, and I do have to go NOW. :---From the bottom of my heart----) Jaime Hey, nobody's human! |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
Dear Son; How nice to see you on PIP again. I don't get on very much any more, I just seem to have toooo much to do. This is a wonderful peace. But, then you always do bring up some thing right from the heart. Your words are always so touching and I love to read what you have done. Love to all Mom |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've read this on several peek-ins... and it touches me more with every read. Simply put... it's gorgeous!! |
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