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Open Poetry #46
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Laverne Pacquire
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since 2009-11-15
Posts 96
0 posted 2010-04-22 06:18 PM

goodbye -

sea, that melts
away into the hills,
very much

breaks
its waves from
the darkness,
moves out

what,
the sea
carries away
grows dim,
color is

into the
deafness
of the hills,
I see

over
there
it's right
twin stars -

full, awake

sleep


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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
Posts 360
New Orleans
1 posted 2010-04-23 04:47 AM

Beautifully captured.
Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
2 posted 2010-04-23 08:31 AM

I love this poem. Very much.
Laverne Pacquire
Member
since 2009-11-15
Posts 96
3 posted 2010-04-23 05:36 PM

Thanks  4 your, comments Lost Poet and Guy!
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2010-04-27 06:07 PM

Enjoyed...James
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