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This World of Early Spring |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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This World of Early Spring As the fine-clear evening moonbeam rooftop dance chases her ever restless spirit through the lovely fleeting twilight, the quintessential question becomes simply ... how shall we count the ways to love this world of early Spring? --- b. e. adams (4/18/2010) |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
 "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, How many ways indeed. You have the right idea here. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I don't know if I can count that high, Bruce. Nature is such a wonderful gift and you do it great honor with your words. Ida |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
and you make it appear so simple poet I admire your feel for nature and your work |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Not only do you capture the fragrant beauty of spring, you capture the essence!! Lovely poem, dreampoet~ |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Very Nice. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"How shall we count the ways". Yes, indeed but how many people bother with that these days when so much is taken for granted. Always enjoy your words. Helen |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh I could count beyond my fingers and toes!!! lovely write Bruce! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Very beautiful. Though light of subject, there is a sadness in the dance. Owl |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you have done well, for you have supplied the answer to your own question...you have counted them with your heart...excellent write...enjoyed |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I loved this poem. You hit the right spot with me. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
''how shall we count the ways to love this world of early spring?''...a great line and how about the answer? By counting the new leaves, the bird song, the flowers unfurling, all ways we can count the ways to love the early spring..thank you for this colourful blossom of a poem.. Goldenrose. Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
essential, magnifique work.I like the questionning of the poet inducing what should be the questionning of people. regards yann |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Bobby, Spring is such sweet things...such a warming touch...thank you for this beauty |
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