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More Than A Memory
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More Than A Memory |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Cold as winter you left me, standing frozen solid, crying icecrystal tears, I lay asleep underneath, the thick blue ice, time has frozen me, This distant war has torn, the heart right out of me, my battlescars show it, No grass grows, cold, cold, my face bares no sunlight, Anarctica is my world, No flowers bloom, nor seasons to change, only coldness remains, You were my last memory, I only hoped to be more, than a memory for you. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Wow, I know this too well. You brought 'chills' to my mind. lol |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
A testimony to the frigidity of lost love hinged on it never being forgotten. The visuals capture the reader and deliver the message. Nicely done. Namyh |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! I sure can relate! Well done sadness here! |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..indeed; a reminder to all, of their become-frozen experiences..enjoyed ..spiros --------- |
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