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Her Poor Heart
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Her Poor Heart |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan 
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her poor heart her heart longs for the return of soft bedroom whispers and the feel of beard stubble rashes her heart remembers sharing Sunday afternoon lemonade and his lawnmower serenades her heart dreams of dinner table laughter and popcorn movie nights with the kids. her poor heart torn and shattered at the doorway from a knock at the door and a letter. “we regret to inform you” Zeitgeist. part of the “war series” |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
A letter all to often sent. This is well done. I bow to you and your's. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I bow to you too...This kind of situation is devastating and so sad... have a nice day yann |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very good and sad |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
what an incredibly moving write...strong ending |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
Thank you everyone for commenting on this poem. War consumes many lifes, both on and off the battlefield. Zeitgeist |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
This is one gem of a poem. |
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