Open Poetry #46 |
Upper Room |
XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
One plus one does away with One so, we kick the moon about while straddling the sun Dead roots sprout Dry streams run in a bed of sleepless dream waking bodies lay blessing bloody goblets Meat joins hands to pray A dead child lives all of your days in a place where shadows scheme Death makes a Bucket List The brightest angel ever shown comes from the dark abyss Sticks and stones wont break his bones Destroy him with a kiss Ten thousand hymns are sung to hide the scream of a small, still voice *** |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I loved both the form and content of this one...the style, the cadence, its visual appearance, word choices all combine to make this one powerful write... |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
Really like this. Lots of great lines, but "Meat joins hands / to pray" really grabbed me. poetry podcasts, blogs and photopoems at URL= http://anthonyarmstrong.ca |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very powerful and thought provoking piece, Larry. Ida |
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