Open Poetry #46 |
World of White |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
World of White Magical, the mounting song of winter snow Twirled in nature’s breath, innocuous emotions blow Let to be light, a dusting of centuries swift and bright New moon glows into shadows once hidden, once din Intimate the story told, aglow without as once within To lay in blanket soft, a quiet scattering of dreams aloft As day discloses new; and strong limbs line horizons fair Beneath but sleeps the next, just jubilant beyond sun’s stare As kept to rest, undaunted and undressed; while world of white aware The simple passage of humble spirit, spritely magnified and waiting there Copyright Kkh 12/31/09 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That's our Kathleen. Happy New Year, my friend! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your own "awareness" of the "world of white", translates into a fine piece of winter wonder! May the coming year be one of serenity, prosperity, and joy! Linda www.lindadowd.com |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just WOW! ♥ Mysteria ♥ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - just snowed last night and this morning is breath taking with all in white... BC |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Kathleen, I love the beauty - inside and out - that you share with us. Lovely poem. A |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
wonderful opening line in particular: “Magical, the mounting song of winter snow Twirled in nature’s breath…” I am also especially fond of: “while world of white aware The simple passage of humble spirit…” |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
HNY...dearest Kath..thanx for giving us yet another beautifully visual write. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I keep reading this over and over like an old friend and like friendship, this deepens every time. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I once said you write gems into all your work let me say it again |
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