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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Were stars to shine in luminescence faint And moonbeams fain to fade light pale My heart would yet o’erflow constraint And seek to serve beyond its dated tale To softly speak of love’s lost potency Imbued with succulent smoothness Washing waves of opulent regency O’er the sand-soft stones of fullness Embedding heart’s desire in fancied flame Yet fretting not at listless discontent That mellows soul within its frame To which my love for thee was lent From realms of soulful prosperity With interest due in loving only me |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very refined poem, dear Steaven. Soulful and captivating. Love, Margherita |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
very deep and soulful...nice work! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Legacy Member
since 2011-01-08
Posts 60Louisiana |
Nice sonnet, steavenr. Bill would approve I believe. A black cat ran in front of me tonight. I'm not worried. they don't bother Warlocks |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very very nicely done Steaven Most enjoyable reading. Eric |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Thank you, Margherita…you make it sound so good that I am starting to feel so much better  Faithm, thank you…I really appreciate you taking the time to not only read, but also to comment Legacy, thanks, had to go back and look at its form…didn’t realize it was in sonnet form (just wrote it down as it came, but I used to write only in Shakespearean sonnet form…dull, huh?) Et, your words were kind and appreciated…thank you (and I am glad you enjoyed) |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Good to see your work again, Steaven. Nicely done. Ida |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Great work! I didn't even realize it was a sonnet til the couplet dinged a bell. Not dull at all. Lori |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Ida, thank you...it is good to be back...have spent a lot of time just reading, some replying and now writing again...feels good Lori, appreciate your kind review...as for the dull part...just remember, (in a Gump-like way) ...dull is as dull does |
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