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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Time moves with my heartbeat, slowly and calmly, in tune with my changing season mind. Seldom quickening, days drift drear, until love weekends flare our vivid colours onto monochrome mundanity. Each hour, a clock tick to weld us to a future, golden as glistering sunlit sea swells, time in a bottle. Friendship is Love without his wings. Lord Byron. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Good to see you here.I have missed your nice words.latearrival |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
always wonderful to see you, Phil~~ hope all is well over there  M |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine imagery ... I am particularly fond of the beginning of this 'penning' !: "Time moves with my heartbeat, slowly and calmly, in tune with my changing season mind. Seldom quickening, days drift drear..." May your 'changing season mind' dance with grand-scintillating thoughts of Spring ! |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England |
Mmmn...my favourite is "Each hour, a clock tick to weld us to a future, golden as glistering sunlit sea swells, time in a bottle." Full of the promise of precious hours spent in a loved ones company.Like this very much. |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Has a sweet yet forlorn feel in its universal tone of trying to hold onto a beautiful moment in time |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 good to read you again |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
glad to see this 'write' back near the top of the "P.I.P.-land" by the cyber-sea queue! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You capture so much, so eloquently! Your first line is gorgeous, and sets the tone for me. always so nice to ready you, Goldenrose~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You poetry is rhythmic, a nice and slow rhythm that is easy to read. The premise isn't bad either. ~ After twelve years of therapy my psychiatrist said something that brought tears to my eyes. He said, "No hablo ingles." ~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Simply gorgeous, dear Phil! Love, Margherita |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Golden dreams, stored in a bottle, lay asleep, For the kiss of an awakening... Time moves on, yet stays the same, hearts continue to beat, tattooed with a written name. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I loved this: "Seldom quickening, days drift drear, until love weekends flare our vivid colours onto monochrome mundanity" ...nice, very nice |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a pleasant surprise! It seems like ages since I have had the privilege of reading a poem by our illustrious Rose of Gold! Those vivid colours glistening in the sun are worth enduring the "monochrome mundanity" of most days during the week! Enjoy your colourful, love-filled weekends! Warm welcome-back hug, Linda  |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Phil, it is always good to stop and read your poetry. It's beautiful and gives me a second to pause and simply "enjoy". Thank you and please don't be gone so long. Alison |
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