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faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-02-23 04:52 PM

oh, my soul-
some say it is
an old one
others say it is
quite deep
but no one knows
my heart-felt joy
nor the tears
i sometimes weep

oh, my soul
has work to do
in its search
for beauty and truth
i see God in everyhing
as i have done
since i was
in my youth

oh, my soul
if i should pass
i'll know my
work here is done
but while i am
still on this earth
i'll speak my piece
out of a need
to be heard through
the written word

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2011-02-23 04:58 PM

This has connotations of the old children's bedtime prayer, but with a mature acceptance which still manages unwavering faith and wonder.

Your name suits you.

Enjoyed.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-02-23 05:17 PM

thank you so much for your lovely comments...they mean a lot!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-02-23 05:49 PM

Sweet words, almost prayer-like, Faith. I enjoyed reading this, it is special.

~ Life is sexually transmitted ~

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

4 posted 2011-02-23 05:52 PM

Thank you, my friend...that means alot to me coming from you.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2011-02-23 09:49 PM

...and they are words well-written...nice, very nice

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

6 posted 2011-02-23 11:37 PM

thank you so much, steavenr...i appreciate that very much

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2011-02-26 03:44 AM

mairee this is beautiful and enlightning, thanks for the awesome and very precious words.

have a nice day

yann

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2011-02-26 10:17 AM

Precious soul talk that convinces me. Very nicely done.

Love,
Margherita

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

9 posted 2011-02-26 10:45 AM

A beautiful poem and a beautiful truth, Faith.

Owl

sim0riah
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

10 posted 2011-02-27 11:12 AM

Very nice words
and of course a very beautiful soul!

Enjoyed
Rich

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