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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-02-23 01:48 PM

Sweet obsession
of mine
A debauchee
succumbing
Temptation
an appetizer
whetting
that voracious
single minded
space
full focused on
fulfilling
the insatiable

LGR©2/23/11

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2011-02-23 03:53 PM

had to read it a couple of times to get the timing down (but I was going to do that anyway...so good, you know) and when I did...well, so many levels...so good

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-02-23 03:59 PM

Thanks Steaven, glad you liked it.
Lori

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

3 posted 2011-02-23 04:38 PM

wow...this is really good...great job, Lori

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2011-02-23 04:54 PM

I'm impressed with the growth of your expressions, and particularly the style.

Really well done, Lori.

Enjoyed.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2011-02-23 05:48 PM

Ah, gotta watch those insatiable females. And heaven forbid if they are debauchee's. I loved this one.

~ Life is sexually transmitted ~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2011-02-24 08:23 AM

Very "tasty" in its brevity, dear Lori.

Love,
Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2011-02-24 08:57 AM

Thanks Faith, glad I can count on you to support my work, thanks friend.
Lori

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

8 posted 2011-02-24 08:57 AM

hahaha~ this made my stomache growl!

great poem!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

9 posted 2011-02-24 09:04 AM

serenity blaze-thanks for you comments I appreciate them very much.
_______________________________________
Jerry-Gotta love ya! thanks.
_______________________________________
Margherita- Glad you liked the "sample"

Lori

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2011-02-24 09:47 AM

Some good alliteration in this one!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

11 posted 2011-02-24 09:56 AM

Thanks for noticing my litter!
Lori

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