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Yesterday’s Window
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Yesterday’s Window |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Looking out yesterday’s window Letting your whispering wind Wind through my mind Stirring up smiles Warming memories Lingering in my heart 2/21/11 |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
what a sweet poem...beautiful one, Lori There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks for being here Faith and supporting my work. Lori |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
A beautiful concept sensitively and creatively portrayed. Really lovely, Lori. Owl |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thank you so much Owl Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Beautifully composed / Warmed the cockles of my heart / Anybody really know what a cockle is? / Google here I come / Here is where you gop to find out what the cockles of your heart is . . . http://www.wisegeek.com/what-are-the-cockles-of-your-heart.htm ~ Life is sexually transmitted ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry that's great now I know all about cockles...lol..that word just makes me giggle. Thanks for being here. Lori |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Ah, the breeze-scene window behind, with nostalgic soup in pan upon the stove. Short, but a good read. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Hey Kat thanks for the read! ______________________________________ Easy1- glad you liked it! Lori |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I think the wind just blew this in through my window. I love it. Thank you for writing, Lori, and thank you for sharing what you write. Alison |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
such a feel-good reminiscence...enjoyed looking out that window with you...thanks for sharing |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Alison and Steaven- Thanks for being here and wanting to share my words with me.  Lori |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I'm so glad your yesterday's window didn't stir up a frown. May all your future "yesterday's windows" grant the same view. Enjoyed, Lori. Helen |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A strain of melancholy reflection amoung those nice memories? Maybe not.....smile.... great writing as usual Lori. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, Lori! Ah, yes! Looking through yesterday's window can be such a warm, and pleasant experience. You expressed those remembrances both romantically and poetically. Lovely poem.  ~ May all your memories be happy ones!  EA |
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blankmirrors Junior Member
since 2010-07-16
Posts 14 |
Dear Lori, I enjoyed reading this tender, warm poem. The portraying of yesterday as a window triggered thoughts about temporality and the correlations between the present, the past and the future. Best wishes. |
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