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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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 Darling daughter of my heart Open is the cage that kept me locked Notice how my freedom is your door Ever in my heart needs nothing more --------- To Michelle, always in my loving memory ( a repost on the day of her death) |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Dear Martie, Your poetry has touched me deeply, escpeically your poetry about your daughter, Michelle. I don't have children so can't comprehend the pain a Mother has at the death of her child; however, I have seen my Mother grieve for her son. I know that even though time has eased some of her sorrow - what she feels is only felt by another Mother who has gone through the same thing - and I know that while the pain has eased, it remains with her. It is part of her. I am thinking of you. Alison |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Cannot express what I feel. ~ Life is sexually transmitted ~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Alison...you have such a lovely heart...thank you for your presence Jerry...some things have no words |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
More hugs, dear Martie. Love Helen |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
So beautiful and moving! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Tears for your pain, Martie, and smiles through the tears, for your courage and freedom. Michelle will be happy that you can now fly. (Thank you for letting us know in Linda's messages, that it is Margherita's birthday so that I could send her an electronic birthday card.) Hugs and lots of love Owl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Holding you, Sis, and smiling at Michelle.  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Helen...thank you for the more hugs FaithMairee...She touches many...nice to meet you. Diana...Thanks always for your warm heart. I considerate special that Margherita was born on this day. Sissie...Thank you hugs!! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I was thinking that too, Martie. Margherita is such a wonderful person, so worthy of being born on the same day of the year that Michelle ascended into Heaven. Lots of love and hugs Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful poem, Martie. Touches my heart more than you can imagine. My own daughter would have been 45 on February 17th. Love, Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Tears and hugs, Ida. Owl |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Michelle would be 46, Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I am sure they have met in Heaven and are the best of friends while being the Guardian Angels of their respective mothers here on Earth. Owl |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
((((((((((((Martie))))))))))) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear dear Martie, the imagery in this and the deep meaning are exceptional. You and Michelle fly together in the immense open space of your souls. Your words on my behalf express sensitivity and love that reach beyond the visible, they are tangible deep in the heart and move me to tears. You create a connection beyond time and space that makes me pause in awe. Thank you, dear Martie, from the bottom of my heart. Thank you, dear Diana too. You weave silverthreads from one to another where the energy of love travels at high speed and brings joy. Love and hugs to both. Margherita  |
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incwrite Member
since 2010-12-31
Posts 55new york |
Feel this warm hug ... so very sorry for your loss.. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Notice how my freedom is your door ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That says it all! You weave the love so beautifully, Martie. It is evident, your hearts are surely one! x/o |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Margherita. I am very touched at your response to me in this very, very special Michelle poem of Martie's. Owl |
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