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Open Poetry #47
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gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
Posts 70
California
0 posted 2011-02-20 11:02 PM

My heart is singing
You have gotten away
I should have caught up by now
You were true
The only soul i found
The only girl that could have brought me back
I cant lie you're beautiful
I cant stand to hurt
Let me fly away

What i believe is true
Let me show you who i am
My heart wants this dream to come true

Let the sun set behind you
Where my life can begin with you
My eyes have met a the perfect girl
Now let her meet my love
Let this all come true
And if you dont try
I can understand
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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2011-02-21 07:26 AM

At the end of this writing you're very understanding....That takes a lot of courage.
Nice expressions of love.

Eric

in a relationship the me becomes we.
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