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Open Poetry #47
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vandana
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0 posted 2011-02-20 05:31 PM



So Much
This day
So much
Has happened
This year
Has been so much for us
So much to see
What's going on
So much around the world
It is sad to see
It is too bad
To get hurt sometimes, somedays
To go on
In our life
Maybe
There is a way
To make it alright
There will be a time
There will be day
To shine our dreams
When time comes
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1 posted 2011-02-20 05:51 PM

I hope that time comes to you soon, dear vandana.  You make me smile whenever I see your little icon on my poetry threads.

Thinking of you.
Alison
faithmairee
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2 posted 2011-02-21 02:17 AM

This is such a gentle and moving poem...many of these things i've relected upon...great poem

There must be a poem in here somewhere.
ethome
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3 posted 2011-02-21 02:52 AM

The time will come vandana

enjoyed!

Eric

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