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Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

0 posted 2011-02-20 02:55 AM

In my final breath
I want to know that I
(omg) owned my grief
and
(lol) lived, out loud.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2011-02-20 03:05 AM

I want to LOL 2
B4 I die.

A

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

2 posted 2011-02-20 03:12 AM

So then let it be, for both of us.

It was the happiest and, saddest day
when I realized that everything deep
inside of me, was put there
by myself.

Hang in there dear, the deaf man can hear your heart from the other side
of everywhere.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2011-02-20 03:19 AM

You hang in there too and keep sharing your writing. You are a very talented man, Richard.

Friends hang together ...
Alison

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

4 posted 2011-02-20 03:26 AM

Oh I'm hanging okay, pssst, hey can someone loosen this rope neck tie they gave me that was tied to a tree... silly people...

haha.

You too Alison, you too

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2011-02-20 11:59 AM

Enjoyed this, Rich. I guess we poets are living out loud, at least we are saying what we feel.
Ida

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

6 posted 2011-02-20 12:19 PM

nice one, cleverly written...enjoyed it a lot

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

7 posted 2011-02-20 02:55 PM

Yes Ida exactly, live out loud, laugh out loud, love out loud... ? ... well maybe not that last one... haha.

Thanks Faith you're always there with a kind word.

Richard

Nareena
Member

since 2011-02-17

Posts 51
BC, Canada

8 posted 2011-02-20 03:26 PM

LOVE IT!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

9 posted 2011-02-20 03:35 PM

ME TOO!

Love it!

Eric

in a relationship the me becomes we.

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

10 posted 2011-02-20 03:50 PM

Awww see... here's some love out loud right here

Thanks Nareena and Eric I Aol, appreciate it out loud!

Richard

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2011-02-20 05:26 PM

enjoys

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

12 posted 2011-02-20 10:32 PM

I appreciate it Vandana!

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