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Open Poetry #47

Not a Moment Too Soon

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-02-19 06:50 PM

Looking forward
to a place
just an inth in front
of my nose
almost overlooking
the obvious
Upon closer inspection
of my nature...
Not a moment too soon...
2/19/11

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

1 posted 2011-02-19 07:36 PM

cleverly written, Lori...you are so good with saying so much in so few words...love this one.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-02-19 07:46 PM

As always Faith, thanks for your generous comments.
Lori

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

3 posted 2011-02-19 08:06 PM

my pleasure, Lori...i love your poetry

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-02-19 08:21 PM

Gotta love it! Whew. So glad you managed to get past that inth and just in the nick of time. Your nature thanks you, and so do I.

In the 60's, people took acid to make the world weird. Now the world is weird and people take Prozac to make it normal.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2011-02-19 09:15 PM

Hey Jerry!Good seein' you too

Lori

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