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Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

0 posted 2011-02-19 02:30 PM

as soon as the stars
rained down their glory,
her intense eyes
adopted a fawnlike demeanor
and he suggested more such walks
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..from 2009; Copyright 2011 Spiros Zafiris
..channeled; spirit Harmony
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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2011-02-19 02:36 PM

I certainly hope she follows up
on the suggestion.
I think I enjoyed this because
we do have several deer that walk
around in the evenings, and of
course I know they are around
when it snows...their tracks
are everywhere.

But...the imagery was sparkling.

Thank you!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-19-2011 03:54 PM).]

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2011-02-19 02:53 PM

Wow, Spiros – this is to die for! I just KNOW that she was only to eager for more walks! I love this to bits.

Owl

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

3 posted 2011-02-19 03:02 PM

..oh, Sunshine and Owl..you are both
so kind

..spiros
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Alison

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since 2008-01-27

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4 posted 2011-02-19 03:04 PM

The stars were so bright last night - I can see them raining upon her. Beautiful.

A

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

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5 posted 2011-02-19 08:26 PM

..thanks Alison..>>much appreciate your having read and your comment..>>spiros

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

6 posted 2011-02-19 08:28 PM

I can quite understand why more such walks would be the thing to do. Nice work.

In the 60's, people took acid to make the world weird. Now the world is weird and people take Prozac to make it normal.

Nareena
Member

since 2011-02-17

Posts 51
BC, Canada

7 posted 2011-02-19 09:04 PM

VERY enjoyable! Both the poem and the walk! Thank you for sharing

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2011-02-19 09:22 PM

lovely and a delightful read. Very much enjoyed.
Lori

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

9 posted 2011-02-19 09:33 PM

..Jerry, Nareena, and Lori..>>i am grateful
for all your kind words..>spiros

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

10 posted 2011-02-19 10:37 PM

Just beautiful, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

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To love is to live

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

11 posted 2011-02-20 02:13 AM

..thank you Kat..>>it pleases me you enjoyed the tanka..

..>>spiros
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