Open Poetry #47 |
Pending Deafness |
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Pending Deafness Shall I be as Beethoven and suffer the loudness of quiet ~ to rely solely on tonal qualities that tremor through floorboards and feel the disquiet of one's touch in their nervousness of this affliction? A child wonders at blindness & plays such games of bluff enough so to be glad to remove the folds of cloth from face & rejoice in the light. There, too, to play in water & sea foam and know (only) momentarily the closed hush of water's muffled qualities, only to spring forth & up & relish the cry of the gull or sound of bluejay, scolding. To know deafness may be coming one does hidden things ~ listens carefully to all words and measures with fluttering fingertips the beating heart, the child's whisper, the cry of babes, even a dial tone & most certainly, a lover's voice. Then quietly, one prays that this pending deafness is a long time coming. ~*~ ©Karilea Rilling Jungel Repost from 24 September, 2000 Revised slightly 2011 |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
.very engaging poem, Karilea..indeed if deafness is to come, may it be far, far, far, away..>>spiros |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is brilliant. I am keeping it. Thank you so much for sharing this poem with us again. I am in awe (truly). Love, A |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yes ma'am thank you for sharing it |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
engaging...yes...brilliant...yes...and so beautifully expressed...truly excellent. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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