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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Dancing the smile in my heartbeat feathers on my feet I undulate in the winds of your opened eyed attention to my details 2/17/11 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
. . . and open eyed attention is what it's all about . . . feet feathers, eh? ~~ All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand ~~ |
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Nareena Member
since 2011-02-17
Posts 51BC, Canada |
I love how you ended this! It fit so well! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"I undulate in the winds of your opened eyed attention" ...too cool, too cool |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
very cool, Lori...this is really good  There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Hey Jerry! Good to see you! Thanks for being here. _________________________________________ Nareena- glad you liked it thanks for letting me know! _________________________________________ Hey thanks Steaven, I always wanted to write something "too cool" you made my day! ________________________________________ Faith, I'm glad you agree with Steaven..and as akways glad you are here. Lori |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Got to agree with Steaven - a very cool line - from a cool writer I might add. Helen |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Helen! |
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