Open Poetry #47 |
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The honeysuckle |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
My mother liked the smell of the honeysuckle, This wild and rare, white and ideal flower Which grows only near certain persons, The one who are good-hearted or have a fatal sweetness. I understands now why We liked its quiet perfume of noons, This flower offers what is the best there, the most delicious intoxicating and delicious, This perfume frees from any contingency, Of the past and the too dense passions, It is a journey, a pleasure to love A dream which everybody can acquire If he is lucky enough, has time and a nose, If he lets his soul penetrate into the flower Making of this moment the highest sweetness, To love his mother will never be an error. |
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graying1 Member
since 2011-02-09
Posts 53The Commonwealth of VA |
Enjoyed I have lots of Honeysuckle around not sure what that means but when blooming it's soothing PS |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Lovely, Yann! Soothing and as beautiful as the flower and its perfume. There was a honeysuckle hedge around the garden of my childhood home. I can see it still, and smell its sweet perfume. Your poem took me back to happy days of playing in the garden and climbing my favourite tree. Thank you. Owl |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks graying 1, enjoy this magnificent flower and its perfume as soon they are blooming, you will miss it after. thanks for the beautiful comment. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks OwlSA, your wonderful comment made me happy as it made you remember sweet memories....Exquisite indeed. yann |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Yann-This is simply beautiful. I love flowers and this one is no exception. Your poem is truly lovely! faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"If he lets his soul penetrate into the flower" ...this is an exquisite insight so aptly portrayed...nice write |
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