Open Poetry #47 |
babies |
faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
babies, babies, babies everybody loves babies fat babies, skinny babies ugly ones, snuggly ones forlorn babies soon-to-be-born babies i have no babies but i carried one once and mourned its death no retake on this scene dream or no dream There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi Faithmairee, I really love the poem even there is some regrets in it..This is an excellent expression of babies world that is so important. have a nice day yann |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Yann-Thank you so much for your comments. I have only ever been pregnant one time in my life and I miscarried. I wrote this about that experience. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you know, Faith, when one of the great poets of all time (David of Psalms fame) experienced what you have, he said regarding his loss "I shall go to him, but he shall not return to me" and hope was born (thank you for sharing this lovely write) |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thank you...i appreciate your comments very much There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thank you for sharing this. Lori |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
thank you for stopping by and reading it, Lori There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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