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Open Poetry #47

Maggie's Departure

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2011-02-15 05:59 PM

Maggie's Departure

"To whom shall I say goodnight?"

Maggie you done me wrong
and now all I've got left
is this sad song
and a million dollar bill
on this old house on a hill
with rooms full of memories.
Don't get me wrong
I know that I can go on,
I have no choice,
what's left to do,
if you don't want me
I don't want you,
but for now Maggie
I still do.

Newsflash:"Maggie I still want you."

JamesLee
11February
2011

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

1 posted 2011-02-15 09:41 PM

this is really great...sad and profound...i enjoyed this one a lot!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2011-02-16 04:43 AM

Thanks James for the excellent poem, this is sad and sweet.

yann

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2011-02-22 09:06 PM

Thank you faith and 2islander2 for the nice responses...James

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