Irresistible - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-02-15 10:33 AM

Languishing in my skin
waiting for my
sweet imagination
to begin
to tell
my favorite lie
to let me
feel
I am
irresistible

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2011-02-15 10:36 AM

~simply irresistible~~ reminds me of that old Robert Palmer song!

~enjoyed this~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-02-15 10:42 AM

BG-thanks for checkin' it out and commenting 'preciate it.
Lori

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

3 posted 2011-02-15 11:58 AM

I am sure that sometimes it is not a lie.

Imagination can be a little strange that way.
A pleasant and well-crafted read and write.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2011-02-15 12:04 PM

Thanks easy1 you are too kind
Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2011-02-15 11:00 PM

Lies are permissible as long as they put a smile on our faces.

~~ All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand ~~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (02-16-2011 07:33 AM).]

graying1
Member

since 2011-02-09

Posts 53
The Commonwealth of VA

6 posted 2011-02-16 06:15 AM

I’m sure you are irresistible
Maybe not to yourself always,
But to someone that listens to your words
Catches your meanings in a conversation
Looks forward to seeing your smile

I would be very surprise if there was not someone
That finds you
Simply irresistible

Peter

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2011-02-16 08:19 AM

Jerry, in that case I lied about the dress LOL. Jus kiddin' thanks for being here.
Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2011-02-16 08:20 AM

Thanks Peter, you are much too kind.
Lori

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

9 posted 2011-02-16 11:42 AM

this is excellent...and Jerry is right (though I wouldn't personally categorize it as a lie)

...your words are definitely irresistible.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

10 posted 2011-02-16 11:59 AM

Thanks Steaven

Lori

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

11 posted 2011-02-16 05:31 PM

i thought i had already commented on this one...i agree that your poem is excellent...it's always a pleasure reading your fine work.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

12 posted 2011-02-16 06:19 PM

Hey thanks Faith it is always good to see you here.
Lori

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.