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Valentine's Song
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Valentine's Song |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Valentine’s Song Easily shattered Fragile as a dove’s white wings Yet trust, forthcoming For such is hope’s slender limb Holding to such faith as this Life, so delicate Yet resounds in reddest breast With such a sweet song Turn away not, harbingers Return to faith on spring’s wind Such is winter’s last folly Fulsome play of heart Giving take of sprites Playing the season so well Giving spring thus its heart beat Easily shattered, Even Red’s fragility Stood the coldest test To see him as Valentine For he sings to one true love  " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love ~*~ KRJ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Wonderful and expressive thoughts here, Sunshine, concerning the life cycle of seasons and the living things which survive. The thought of valentine and love in the air urges the most fragile to hearken to a distant land called spring. Nice. I liked this'n. ~~ All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand ~~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Love it Sunshine...Be my Valentine. Lori |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
what a lovely birdsong, Sunshine! Happy Valentine's Day ! |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
this is simply lovely...your ending line was really wonderful...Happy Valentine's Day, Sunshine! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Delightful, Karilea! Owl |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely thoughts and photo, Sissie! xoxoxo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Just yesterday I saw my first cardinal of the season perched on the branch of my poplar tree. Lovely as always~~ M |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I hopr you are not saying that Valentine's Day is for the birds!!  No, of course you're not, and what you are saying is sweeter than a bird's song, announcing Spring. May you have a wonderful day, Sunshine  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IZTVNhjp7H8&feature=related A song for a song? Happy hugs, K.  |
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Sunshine
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Serenity, I'm listening to Linda even now as I thank you for the return present... it's perfect! I'll accept a comment from you anytime, 'deer! Maureen...they stay all year here...do you think it helps because I feed them? Thank you, Sissie! Happy Valentines Day, Faith, Diana, Belle and Lori!! JP, I like it too...thank you! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
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I'm glad you liked it. (When Linda hits that one long note, my "girls" salute!)  |
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Sunshine
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LOL....  |
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