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I want to Fall...
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I want to Fall... |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia 
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I've never broken a bone I'm no good at ice skating or roller blading or surfing or anything that involves falling to learn I'm petrified of falling Petrified of crashing Petrified of getting hurt when I discover There's no one there to catch me. But you challenge me 'Let him lead' And I want to build a tower Of all of my self-created weaknesses and faults and short comings And climb and conquer One at a time And climb and climb and climb. Until I am standing on the precipice... And I want to jump And fall... into the depths of your eyes and the beauty of your mind into the passion of your embrace and the kindess of your soul into the warmth of your kiss and the expanse of your spirit I want to fall... I want to fall... I want to fall... into love. The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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Rula New Member
since 2011-02-14
Posts 5 |
And I want to jump And fall... into the depths of your eyes and the beauty of your mind into the passion of your embrace and the kindess of your soul into the warmth of your kiss and the expanse of your spirit I want to fall... I want to fall... I want to fall... into love. What a nice fell to fall into love Very beautiful words . I like these lines the most though i felt the whole piece close to me.. Thanks a lot for sharing such nice thoughts |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Like the misdirection of this piece, i.e., hating to fall, but wanting desperately to fall . . . in love. Nice. ~~ All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand ~~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Indeed the wish of many I think - takes a bit of courage though. Loved your poem. Welcome to Pip! Helen |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Much enjoyed, Rainbowdust. Owl |
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