Open Poetry #47 |
Charcoal |
Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Charcoal You, where, the gleam of hope Like snow in a full moon That shined across the scape Until reality's touch Reminded me how cold It has to be to snow I will never regret, The fun in the white snow For I only did wished That I brought some charcoal for contrast to the white Of your spherical face So I could see your eyes Even at a distance Juju -Juju -"So you found a girl Who thinks really deep thoughts What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos [This message has been edited by Juju (02-14-2011 10:21 AM).] |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
good clean writing...this poem is beautifully penned...love the contrast of charcoal and snow...great poem There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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graying1 Member
since 2011-02-09
Posts 53The Commonwealth of VA |
Have you been making snow men? Good poem PS |
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