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Tanka..beneficial
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada 
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persistently, the hermit writes and writes a beneficial outcome circled its request; now, a balm, each word, he offers ---------------- ------------------ ..Copyright 2011 Spiros Zafiris ..channeled; spirit Ram; reaching into the poet's heart --------------- |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
very profound and finely penned...enjoyed it much! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I see him now. Hunched over a makeshift desk, candle burnt almost down to nothing. Wispy air around the sides of his head, bald on top. Quill poised over parchment paper, tongue pushed between his bearded mouth. I see all this and know the hermit is going to pen something profound. In his eyes, it will be profound. ~~ All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand ~~ |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..thanks faithmairee..>>you're very kind <<>> <<>> ..Jerry, amusing man, thanks for commenting <<>> <<>> ..spiros ---------- ----------- |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Hauntingly exquisite - I see this in the form of a scene from a French art movie - with the camera moving slowly over every aspect of his face and showing various textures around the room in shades of old gold and rich browns. I believe the hermit’s writing will not be in vain. Owl |
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