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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA 
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the guy who's doing the books is forever following around the guy who does the printing who is following around the pretty girl who answers the telephone to see what the deal is with her because there just might be something more than photos developing between them in the darkroom but the secretary, who is tall and thin and looks like a model understands the way things are and is one smart cookie who knows the owner is an even smarter one who doesn't much like socializing in the office so she tries to act aloof around the printer who is prone to play the fool for her nevertheless, she's already taken but can't make up her mind if she wants to stay that way or not because marriage ain't so hot to her (but they don't that) and everyone---except maybe the secretary seems to be acting a little nervous There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Entertaining. I adore the way it's cinched up in the final line. Excellent. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thank you for your wonderful comments on my poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Way to tell the tale and the ending is killer! Lori |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
He he I like the ending of this. Don't know if I can find that secretary's cell number or not. I want to do an inside job! Eric ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms faith...I think I know her... from her smile...cool stuff ms |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Lori-Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Eric-Sorry... me thinks that cell is a private one! lol Dark Stranger-Gawd, you are good...I mean very good...who wouldv'e thought the smile was a dead give away.... Glad you enjoyed my poem! (Smiling) There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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