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lady grows up
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lady grows up |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA 
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lady was the friendly hound who stopped every morning to chat with the contentious black cat who waited for her down the street she spent the summer running free chasing rabbits through the woods catching one upon occasion and hiding in the tall green grass in the fall she gave birth to six pups one of which we decided to keep winston follows her around now prancing about tail curling like a question mark suspended in air There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Love it! Purrs to the cat, and woofs to Winston and Lady, and to the other pups if you know where they are Owl |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!  Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Awww this was great, I've got a beloved black cat, I loved the tail question mark line. Very well done! Richard |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
When I saw the title I thought of the old Frank Sinatra song, "Luck be a Lady Tonight. I guuess I'll go around humming it all day now. Thee question mark tail was a fun thing to put into your poem. Loved it. ~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Your title pulled me in and I got a completely different poem than I thought I was going to (I like that) Gotta love it when it comes to animals, you painted the picture well |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thank you, Richard. I appreciate your wonderful remarks. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
JerryPat-Thank you for your comments. I'm always happy to see you. Lori-Thank you for your lovely comments. I really appreciate them. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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