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Enchanted Deer Dawn (repost)
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Enchanted Deer Dawn (repost) |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Dawn found Doe eyed carcass entrails Splayed upon a back road For a witches read Swearing as much ‘bout the broken bike as What he still can‘ t believe Eyes playing tricks Mind wandered off Maybe No way did he see No Couldn’t be A woman was there Big dark eyes Long golden warm Brown hair Only A wisp of white She wore Gently Into the Break of day (repost) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Enchantment to be sure. I have the vision of a ghostly woman covered with a scant covering of white and those huge dark eyes smiling evilly at me. I will probably have that vision the rest of the day. ~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Why must the eyes be evil? Can't they be deep pools of come hither, or are you just into evil women these days LOL Glad you liked my repost. Lori |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
very haunting images, very well told...enjoyed |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
this is awesome, lori...i loved every word of it...kudos There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Steaven, glad you liked this one, thanks for letting me know. ___________________________________________ Faith, ooh kudos! my favorite! Thanks much! Lori |
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