Heartsleeve In The Big Bue Sea

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Open Poetry #47

Heartsleeve In The Big Bue Sea

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-02-09 03:50 PM

Heartsleeve
peeled off her sensibles
and her
bashful unabashed
skinny dipped
in the big blue sea
LGR(C)2/9/11

[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (02-09-2011 04:43 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-02-09 04:26 PM

And here you are, Lori, peeling off your sensibles along with your bashful, unabashed
skinny and dipping along in the big blue sea of Passions. Gotta love it!!!

~ Some people are like a Slinky -- not really good for anything -- but you still can't help but smile when you shove them down the stairs. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-02-09 04:48 PM

Well you know those darn unabashed, whadaya gonna do? They kinda gotta mind of their own, know what I mean?
Lori

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

3 posted 2011-02-09 05:32 PM

cool poem...i really like it

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2011-02-09 06:14 PM

Enjoyed...James

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

5 posted 2011-02-09 06:19 PM

gotta love skinny dipping!

graying1
Member

since 2011-02-09

Posts 53
The Commonwealth of VA

6 posted 2011-02-10 06:19 AM

Enjoyed
but
at my age it's better to be just a
spectator sport.

PS

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2011-02-10 09:27 AM

Thanks Faith! Glad you are here.

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Thanks James
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bel1e- yes the waters are warm here
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Gray 1- I'm no spring chicken either so there is no real water involved...just alluding to the blue pages of pip. Thanks for checking me out,glad you enjoyed!

Lori

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